Wednesday, 23 March 2016

Thursday, 10 March 2016

Drafting and planning

After creating my draft of my music magazine i have since changed and improved the front page and the contents page, after receiving feedback on it. A piece of feedback i received was that there wasn't enough features on my contents page and too much was written about an artist, so i have made the description about an artist smaller and added more features to the page. Another piece if feedback i got was there wasn't enough page numbers for a monthly magazine, so i have increased the number from 44 to 123. The feedback i got was very beneficial to me as it helped me improve my magazine.