Drafting and planning

After creating my first draft of my music magazine(http://benitaasmedia.blogspot.co.uk/2016/01/drafting-and-planning-first-draft.html) i recived some feedback that my anchorage text that features on the front cover could be more 'edgier'. I agree with this too because my artist is hevily influenced by Lana del rey and Lorde as they are both popular female alternative-pop artists. So I have looked at anchorage texts and main cover lines from magazines that feature Lana and Lorde, the image on the left. The main cover lines that feature the word 'sultry' and 'mysterious' reflects Lana's ethos and the ones that say 'Baddest diva' and 'girl who broke the rules' reflects Lordes. As my artist is influenced by these two artists my main cover line/anchorage text should incorporate this. Once i have created a new one I will use this in my next draft of my music magazine.